3vil L337
May 15 2008, 01:41 AM
n/t
mrxak
May 15 2008, 03:26 AM
I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind
I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs
I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return
I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind
3vil L337
May 15 2008, 01:44 PM
Please tell me you wrote that
mrxak
May 15 2008, 02:38 PM
I did, years ago.
Mispeled
May 15 2008, 09:17 PM
I haven't had one of those long, nights to be alone in awhile. I think it's about time for a few more of those.
Rickton
May 16 2008, 10:21 AM
QUOTE(mrxak @ May 15 2008, 04:26 AM)

I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind
I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs
I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return
I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind
Those aren't haikus.
mrxak
May 16 2008, 03:35 PM
Good eye.
dude3
May 19 2008, 02:35 AM
Poetic jaunts on webboards are completely inappropriate,
Especially on Trash Talk where the words collide with destiny.
mrxak
Aug 1 2008, 02:43 PM
I've been working on a poem about the first cave man to look up at the stars and wonder about them, but I'm having trouble with the mid-part.
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