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3vil L337
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mrxak
I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind

I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs

I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return

I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind
3vil L337
Please tell me you wrote that
mrxak
I did, years ago.
Mispeled
I haven't had one of those long, nights to be alone in awhile. I think it's about time for a few more of those.
Rickton
QUOTE(mrxak @ May 15 2008, 04:26 AM) *
I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind

I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs

I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return

I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind

Those aren't haikus.
mrxak
Good eye.
dude3
Poetic jaunts on webboards are completely inappropriate,
Especially on Trash Talk where the words collide with destiny.
mrxak
I've been working on a poem about the first cave man to look up at the stars and wonder about them, but I'm having trouble with the mid-part.
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